I've created another slightly different pose test for the confrontation with Rahm, experimenting with slightly more extreme shots. As always, the password is "heyewe":
https://vimeo.com/386093539
And of course, the updated animatic is here:
https://vimeo.com/372554560
A few things I'm thinking I need feedback on:
- STORY?/SHOTS: I keep getting comments that the ending seems slow, especially when eve opens the hatch. How do I convey the same information differently?
- ANIMATION+SHOTS: After Eve successfully spells "HELP", I feel like what I have right now is a little bit awkward. What does Eve do? Does there need to be a cut?
- I've altered the "frog" scene a little bit. Does it still make sense? Did it EVER make sense?
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